The Start
You Wake, the sun has risen.
open eyes, again a prison.
Go outside, noise of sorrow.
pray again, for no tomorrow.
walk streets, are people alive?
born into , for we must strive.
the reason, there are no reasons.
change of heart , change of seasons.
got my meal, am i hungry?
children starving, am I sorry?
I stand, see beautiful flower.
I move, construction for power.
Everyone fights, money rules.
People please wake, your fools.
I look ahead, who can I trust.
Someone there? To search , you must.
I smile, so people hate.
To listen , it is my fate.
magic hands, to fix the heart.
I see reason, for its a start.
To end ourselves, it is our mark.
People wake, its getting dark!
Moon is rising, the sun sets!
Good and evil, place your bets.
You Wake, the sun has risen.
open eyes, again a prison.
Go outside, noise of sorrow.
pray again, for no tomorrow.
walk streets, are people alive?
born into , for we must strive.
the reason, there are no reasons.
change of heart , change of seasons.
got my meal, am i hungry?
children starving, am I sorry?
I stand, see beautiful flower.
I move, construction for power.
Everyone fights, money rules.
People please wake, your fools.
I look ahead, who can I trust.
Someone there? To search , you must.
I smile, so people hate.
To listen , it is my fate.
magic hands, to fix the heart.
I see reason, for its a start.
To end ourselves, it is our mark.
People wake, its getting dark!
Moon is rising, the sun sets!
Good and evil, place your bets.
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Re: My first poem!
Sun, February 24, 2008 - 10:58 AMI like the balance. Neither too rosy nor too sour.
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Re: My first poem!
Thu, February 28, 2008 - 3:45 PMI think you did a wonderful job..Keep up the good work.